Canadian
It sounded nice.

 Norby
Oh, I've almost forget it. Where are your 20 minute long scores Mr. Docfox?
I would be very courious of them.

 Norby
If you look at the score it says: "not yet finished". That means the end could be abrupt 'cause it's not the end. I didn't finished 'cause after I've get Garritan Personal Orchestra and did't want to write further this MIDI sounding piece. I liked that score and I was wondering how many other people like it, so I didn't have to write a 30 minute long score 'cause people could also comment a one-minute score. Norby

 docfox
I liked it ... but I couldn't figure out the instrumentation (unless it is for synthesizer and drums). The ending is very abrupt. Just over one minute is a problem too. Who plays one minute pieces very often. 3 to 5 minutes is good, and 10 to 20 for a major work (it had better be good to be that long).

Sibelius can allow you to create some great sounds -- but is not the ultimate goal to create something to play? or maybe listen too? It is too short and abrupt IMO for either.

 JPFM
oK, I LKED, only i cant diference the 1 pat and the 2 part to 1 part, i liked you them, in the 3 part i can hear a them of Gloria of vivaldi, NICE WORK!!!!

 Nemisys
it's a good song and has a good idea, just work on steadier transitions and you got it! :D

 danielkretsu
Cool!!

 Beetroot
As we say in South Africa,"Dis Baie lekker"(It's extremely nice!!!)

 KingBrad
This piece is really good It's had a nice tempo

 wmthor
Stunning

 Account Closed
I think it is a great song so far, and perhaps just ending it on a whole note with some nice cymbal crashes or something would make this song perfect.

 wmthor
I'd love to comment on it but I don't have sibelius to listen to it. You should get a recording software and record it so we can hear it. I'm not the best person to ask which software.

 schoolbandgeek1
i would comment but 4 some weird reason it won't come up