LifeAndFireokey... that was rare... lol
mm, i think that u can do it better, find a melody, who can be the queen of the song, over she, do progretios, changes of armony, give she a boy friend (second melody) mmm, mix the 2 melodyes, mmm, if u can, delete the D-C-B progretion (mesuare 57), never do that, until he goes to a abrupt end. but is nice, ^^
Thanks for your post in 2 of my scores. The notation is mmm "my composing notation", first do the chords, leater i gave they the rithm. the blak notes are only for easy reading.
Se you nex!, oh, can y compose a pice for u? ^^ (and, please, if u can, comment in my song: intro for a cloud)
See u!

13 months ago