jona
that sounded good just relax and play alittle softer

 Black_Dise1
nice job!

 bonemstr22
That was pretty good but you were pressing the keys way to hard try pressing them softer, I think that would help, other than that great Job!.

 chriskomo2005
The reason it sounds so crap is that your pressing the keys so hard

 Zer0Gravity
totally awesome wanna talk about ure music or music in general giz a commet ure music is inspiring to first time composisitionists

 Account Closed
Just after the beginning, the tempo was a little awkward, but overall very well done.