can anyone give me some tips with this song im working on. here is the link, can u give me some general things i can work on to make it better???

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XhXJUDBjF9o


much appreciated.

robbie

Good stuff--you have nice tone and a good delivery. It looks as if you are breathing from your chest rather than from your diaphragm/stomach. This leads to weakness at the end of certain phrases. A few lessons on breathing will probably help quite a bit.

Again, though, you are already quite good

Best,
Jersey Jack

your delivery wasn't strong but to work on that start singing from the chest then pull through the stomach.