I'm pretty new to singing too. I took a listen to the clip and it sounds good but we can all use improvement. I was going to hire a vocal coach but decided it'd be too expensive. So I decided to try out online courses for voice instead. Have you ever considered one of these?
I've noticed they help a lot with improving my singing.
Re: Some advice please 16:06 on Friday, December 9, 2016
I i was you, i would practice a bunch of vocal exercises. You can really improve a lot if you put in some work!
Some sites, like: http://jacobsvocalacademy.com has a bunch of free vocal exercises, so there is a ton of free ways to get access to tools that can help you improve. I personally do vocal exercises for about 30 minutes every day, and that really makes a difference in the long run!
Good luck with the practicing
Re: Some advice please 16:14 on Saturday, April 29, 2017
I couldn't seem to open the link to your song. If you still want some advice you might want to have a look at some of my video singing lessons. http://singersadvice.com.
Let me know if there's anything specific you need help with.