yea, i wrote this song about a friend i had that couldn`t stand living, so he killed himself. check it out and tell me what you think, please...

it`s too late to save you
you have gone too far
it`s too late to bring you back
you have too many scars
it`s too late to control you
you have no emotion
it`s too late to console you
because you`ve gone and runaway

maybe next time
i can help you i will make you see
maybe next time
you will learn what it`s like to be happy
maybe next time
you will see your mistakes before you go and lose your self
maybe next time, next time

i wish you were here
because i feel so alone
to bad you`re not near
i really want you to come home
and i want you to come back to me
come back into my life
maybe next time

maybe next time
i can help you i will make you see
maybe next time
you will learn what it`s like to be happy
maybe next time
you will see your mistakes before you go and lose your self
maybe next time, next time

maybe it`s too late for next time
i guess we`ll never know
maybe next time is too far away
that it won`t even show
but maybe next time is tomorrow
whatever i will wait
well maybe next time, next time

*chorus*

neat song. of course not. songs are about expressing emotion, any emotion. sorry about your friend.

so am i (sorry abou your friend)
not critising but music has notes so... could you writ em down or have you just done the words yet

i have like the notes to the lyrics but no guitar or piano yet. i am working on it though. i want to have a really solid piano/violin part to accompany it. it is a slow song but i will get back to you with the notes and stuff.

im so sorry bout your friend. your songs really good though

a slow violin accompanied by a piano? you can`t gey any sadder than that.

I like this song alot.. my best friend commited suicide 2 years ago.. and reading other peoples lyrics can help bring closure cause some days I can`t help but think about my friend. Anyways a song about suicide is never wrong cause REAL music is about life, trials and tribulations and most of all being heard.. Suicide is one of those touchy subjects that people try to fray from.. but through music you can express your emotion and dammit.. theres no better way to heal the pain.. wicked song of course by the way are you going to record it at all???

i probably won`t record anything to soon. i don`t have a band but i am working on it. i will eventually try to record it, but until then i will just keep on rocking.