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I have always liked acoustic guitar. This is a slow yet intense song that seems to build steadily, but never quite climaxes. I think it is potentially a great piece, but needs more instruments to carry it over the top. The song writing skills are clearly there. I like the words, but not sure what they all mean, I assume these may have a more personal meaning, but I of course don't know that. Only the writer can tell us...

I would love to add some more to this piece, like some percussion, and some strings maybe?

Nice song! Keep it up!