bente_kwatro
its great but i've noticed that you've repeated some of the notes too many times. and there's something lacking in the middle. also, the piece is quite short..make it a longer one cuz its a piece that could go on for 5 minutes.

 musicchild
I like this peice. May I play it with my orchestra?

 Tenor-Girl
hey i loved this. really. but it needs a little more in the middle....

 douay
Can i ask what programme you got to play your composition? or was it a live performance?

 dickdona
Of course it has possibilities. Sounds like an idea or a thumbnail sketch for a longer piece. But you have to explore each "theme" to its fullest before moving on. Take your first theme and play around with it until you can't do any more with it. Then the second theme and so on. We might hear a more completed piece in a few months time. Looking forward to it....